“ I think what you posted made a ton of sense. However, consider
this, suppose you added a little content? I am not suggesting your content
is not solid, but suppose you added a headline that grabbed a person's attention? I mean There Are Four Lily Allens is kinda vanilla.
You should look at Yahoo's front page and note how they write post headlines
to get viewers interested. You might add a video or a related pic or two to get readers excited about what
you've written. In my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier. ”